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Left behind by ~Elestra:iconElestra:



Please, don't go. Please don't go.
My useless cries. No one hears. Nobody listens. Nobody wants to know.
Why? Why did you leave me behind?
Was I not good enough? But, Milady, I did everything you wanted! I was everything you wanted me to be! I lost myself and became your shadow, your slave.
Milady, you hurt me!
Leaving me behind was only the last thing.
Milady, I obeyed you! You told, I did. I killed for you. And now those spirits haunt me and you are as white and pure as an angel.
You used me as you'd have used a slut. Isn't that what I was, among all other things?
Why?
I hoped! I hoped that you'd be there, taking my ruined, bleeding body and carrying it to safety! No, you weren't. Did you leave me dying? Did you want me to die?
You did, didn't you?
Forgive me.
Please.
©2008 ~Elestra
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Another weird sad short story.
But this girl is interesting. Maybe I can write more about her...

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`Mithgariel:iconMithgariel: May 15, 2008, 12:55:34 PM
Kirglik, ja täitsa huvitav. Tahaks rohkem teada, et mis oli enne, sest see on ü;priski finaal(ilähedane).
Inglise keele võiks küll üle vaadata, sest selle kallal annaks natuke näkitseda. (Vihje: ahista Hoari ;) )
~Elestra:iconElestra: May 16, 2008, 8:52:00 AM
Aitäh kiituse ja lemmikutesse paneku eest!
Kardetavasti on see inspireeritud lihtsalt sellest, et mu romaanitegelased on hetkel suhteliselt õnnelikud ja ei ole ühtegi fiktsionaalset isikut ahistada. (Yes, I am ebil :) ) Aga vaatame, äkki mul on inspiratsiooni.

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"All our lives
we've been waiting..."
Evanescence- the Only One
`Mithgariel:iconMithgariel: May 16, 2008, 9:02:56 AM
Vaata järgi jah, kindlasti ta (inspiratsioon) peitab end kuskil nurgas, on üksi ja õnnetu.
~Elestra:iconElestra: May 16, 2008, 12:02:58 PM
Näe, tuligi üks uus jutt. Aga nüüd ma lähen romaani kallale, sest see on prioriteetsem.

--
"All our lives
we've been waiting..."
Evanescence- the Only One
`Mithgariel:iconMithgariel: May 16, 2008, 12:04:34 PM
Tubli tubli. Lennukat Pegasust sulle :)